Friday, August 2, 2013

Creative Writing: Crysline

Crysline



Ugly. Different. Freak. These three words are the words that best describes me. I am ugly. I am different. I am a freak. Living with an ugly face and a special ability is not very happy thing to do. Actually, the life of mine is miserable. I hate my face and my ability. I want to be pretty and normal. 

I am Savanna Whitsel, and I live in the "World of Uglies." I don't know if your planet has this world, but in our planet, Crysline, the two worlds exist. The World of Uglies(W.U. for short) and the World of Pretties and Handsomes(W.P.H. for short). I'm ugly, so of course, I belong to the W.U. 

I also have this ability that can read and control other's thoughts. Everyone envies me for having the ability, but I really want to get rid of this. By having the ability, I can read everybody whom I meet and I always get to read their thoughts and to change the thoughts in a good way for me. 

What I mean by this is, that my ability is uncontrollable. There's no choice for me. I have to read thoughts and change them into good ways for me even if I don't want to. Do you think this is good? No, totally not. By having this ability, I get no change to find out who really likes the actual me. 

There's no way to solve this problem, are there? Oh, there's one. I can get rid of this ability by finding my true love. Who sees me as myself. I should find the person. I should go and look for him right now.

Now I'm here in the middle of the W.U. and I can't find anybody. Wait, what's this hole? I'll go down and see what's this hole is for.

Aghhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! 

What is this? I jumped into a hole, I suddenly fell, and now I'm in the middle of  a road!!! What's all this neon signs? Why are cars beeping at me? Why are people staring at me? Why? Why?? WHY??? 

Oh my gosh. Yes, I was in the middle of a road. I quickly moved to the side of the road. Why is this place so loud? There's now place in W.U. that can be loud as this place. Look at the people. They are all pretty and handsome. They are good-looking.

They are PRETTY? They are HANDSOME? Am I in the W.P.H.? O.M.G.! This can never happen! 

W.U. and W.P.H. are totally isolated. Wow, this is amazing. How in the world can this happen! What am I net being sent to jail? There's this law, and it says that Uglies should go to jail if they're in the W.P.H. What's happening? Oh, yes. I have the ability. I got it. 

"What is this ugly doing here?"

My movements stopped. I freezed. My heart was pounding as if it will gonna explode. Who said it? I was a boy, who looked like he was seventeen, which is my age. Hes was handsome. He had long sharp eyes, very sharp nose, and red lips. He looked very sharp. He came to me and said, 

"What are you doing here? I'm going to call the police."

"Oh no! Wait! Look at my eyes for a second", I said.
He looked at my eyes, but I couldn't read any of his thoughts. Who is this boy? Why can't I read his thoughts?

"Why did I have to look at your eyes? I wasted my precious time. I'll call the police."

"No! Please! I didn't mean to be here. I'm accidentally in here. I was wandering around in W.U., then I found a big hole. I was curious, so I went in the hole, then now I'm here! In the middle of W.P.H.! "

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2 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed your story! Very well plotted. Please include some pictures that are related to the story and post two more endings.

    Your imagination is great. Keep up with your good work please!

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  2. I love this story! I've read like a similar book before where like all the ugly people turn pretty when there 16 by doing plastic surgery.. and they get to go to 'pretty town'..! I wish Savanna could go back home!

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